couple photos

[micor]

Hey everyone..

I'm new around here and I'm looking for some c&c on my new work. This is my first time working with photography and i'm trying to get better, so comment harsh. I won't take it offensive =)

http://www.deviantart.com/view/37177376/

and

http://www.deviantart.com/view/37177517/ (Photo ID)

[.goat]

very impressive work
i would have more to say but i got to go lol

[Sean]

welcome to Static-Design micor. I like pretty much both of them. I can't really say much about the first one, I like it, the only thing about it is that some details that could have added to the piece are left in the darkness. As for the second one, it looks a bit too blurry and to be honest I'm not so sure about the font and the font color used on that one. Overal, nice job

[ezekieL]

I like them, but maybe there is a bit too much blur on them? I understand you're going for the "glow" effect, but since they're considered macro, i would suggest for you to have more detail.

[micor]

Thanks everyone for y'alls input. I'll make sure to use all the suggestions y'all made in my next photos.

[.goat]

now go out there and make us proud

[TomScott]

Ok Micor but make sure you come back and post them for us to see

[Starlux]

I had to give the first one a fav
I can see a lot of potential

[Sean]

I agree.